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Reviewer: Tasha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2024 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

A lovely reread today.

 

It wa nice to see Cordy written like this.  Most of the time I'm a bit indifferent to her.  I also love that Xander and Spike had come to a realization before the spell was cast.  You know that usually Xander grates on my nerves.  You have made me like him quite a few times in your stories.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

Whoo, that was hot! No matter what the crisis, since they are together all will be well (in my opinion :D). It was a wonderful story. Thank you!

Reviewer: darth spike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

i liked this story

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

wow!...and wow! soooo GOOD! more, please?

Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

Awesome story, Mary. Always a pleasure to reread.

Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

It would be cool to see this one sequeled. Then again you know I'd always love to see your stories finished or sequeled. I enjoy reading your different slants on things. You truly have your own unique way of looking at the storylines.

Reviewer: Jace Nox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

I think I've reviewed this before but I can't help but do it again! I loved this story so much....is there a sequel?...I probably asked this already but I would love one...*giggles*

 

Keep up the great work,

 

Jace

Reviewer: Jace Nox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

Is there a sequel? I must go off and search for a sequel....

 

BTW loved! loved! loved!

 

Jace

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

Your rewrite was brilliant and absolutely amazing. You touched on everything through S4 and it was wonderful. In this fic Giles wasn't much better then Angel or Willow messing with people's feelings. After what Hassib told him, I guess he found out just what it did cost him...a family. Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic.

Reviewer: jackofspikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 8/Epilogue

OH now you've done it...this just screams sequel!...Loved it.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lovely ceremony. I always enjoy your original characters, they add so much to the story! Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing. Hassib really stuck it to Giles, Angelus and Willow. What a beautiful ceremony. Liked how Spike was the Bard since he was a poet. Of course Spike's snide remark to Xander about him being dirt. And that Buffy was Fire and Spike was Air. They complement each other perfectly. Wonderful chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: jackofspikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

ROFL...what does Spike win????? Love it :D

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved this chapter. I hope Willow realizes how stupidly she's been acting(though, maybe not). I was laughing at all Angel's seduction attempts, what a dork!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Priceless, just the right twist and I'm still laughing at Angel and the ass he was making of himself. Guess he would have hit on Wesley next! That was fun. Thanks for the wonderful time.

Reviewer: jackofspikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Irritation - no remorse...how typical. Brilliant.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 5

Geez, Willow will never learn. And she said she never messed with peoples memories?! Ha! Great chapter. In case you hadn't realized, I'm loving this story! :)

Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Willow makes the comment about not playing with their minds like Giles, and then she goes and does it. She really is an arrogant one. She thinks that whatever she does is right no matter how wrong it is for someone else to do it.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. Willow was losing it but Tabula Rasa was one of my favorite epi's. That's when I fell in love with Giles/Anya pairing. If Tony hadn't needed to go back home, I was hoping that Joss might have paired them for the rest of the series. This should be alot of fun.

Reviewer: jackofspikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

You really do capture Willow's arrogant decent into darkness. Excellent.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Xander and Spike as buds is going to be good for them both! Hopefully Cordelia will become 1/2 demon; I don't want her brain to be mush either!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

Gosh, this is fantastic! Love Anya almost as much as I love Tara. Always hated that they didn't use her as much as they could have. You don't get to be 1100 yrs. old and not know alot about the demon world. Guess this means that Angel is coming for sure and Cordy needs to find a demon to keep her from dying? What a terrific idea. You've got so many great one's running around in that head of your's. Just love this so much.

Reviewer: jackofspikes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

I just love that it's Xander talking to Angel :D

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

I loved how you interlaced the feelings they had to what transpired on the show. They fit in so seamlessly! Great chapter.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

Those were great explanations to all of their behaviors. So they're all coming to SunnyD. Now they'll have to see her wrath and feel her rage to their betrayal. Excellent chapter.

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