Date: 10/10/2010 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1
as usual, you are brilliant...I''ve missed you and your stories my friend.
Date: 03/01/2010 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mary ... I fixed this line by adding in the was ... Silly me. It is the last paragraph before we see Amon and Caly again at the end. Sometimes I reread back through and go dang ... I screwed up again or how did I miss a word. Though I catch myself reading through it and my mind putting the word in.
Wesley nodded in agreement. What he didn't say out loud was that it kinda turned him on.
Date: 03/01/2010 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
Mary ... just to let you know I did an edit here at the end of the chapter east turned to ease ... and some different edits in Chapter 9 that I must have missed the first time around. I don't know if you want to resave the chapters. I only changed things like spelling typos I missed or caused, etc.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 19
oh hell this can't be the end....Great story
Date: 06/13/2009 08:24 am Title: Chapter 14
*squeeeeeee* Update! Very intriguing to think there's a few alternate destinies for Dawn as well. & I liked the Cordelia stuff, & LOVED how Spuffy dealt with Ethan. Still can't wait for the Angel rescue!! :D
Date: 06/13/2009 08:23 am Title: Chapter 19
I enjoyed this story immensely and I'm sorry to see it end. Once again, great work, my dear.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:23 am Title: Chapter 17
Miles O'Brian... Or is it Smiley? :P
Date: 06/13/2009 08:22 am Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe it's done! Kinda conflicted about that since I love all the Immortal Guardian stories. Great job, as always!!
Date: 06/13/2009 08:22 am Title: Chapter 19
Wow! I wasn't expecting the story to be complete! Great ending...interesting that Dawn & Oz are hooking up. & it's interesting how Dawn's mate changes from story to story. Like the traveling Key/Dawn is meant for Amon, but this dimension's Dawn is for Oz. Glad they figured out who the 12th IG was...& I liked how Angel became one of them--reminded me of NBTSA when Buffy said she'd never put her fangs in him. LOL Glad Spuffy got their Tribble too. Wonderful story! Can't wait to see what's up with the other Immortal Guardians. :)
Date: 06/13/2009 08:21 am Title: Chapter 19
i'm glad you got your story finished. i just read through the whole story and i love it even more
Date: 06/13/2009 08:21 am Title: Chapter 18
Bwahahahahaaa! Thank God, indeed! I wonder if Doyle will come back for Cordy, if so, who's w/ Angel? Can't wait to find out! Loved seeing the Spuffy army taking down the Iniatiative. & NIFTY!!!! Love that Buffy's new abilities can be broadcast (for lack of a better word in my excitement :P). Fantastic update!
Date: 06/13/2009 08:20 am Title: Chapter 17
Xander just never stops, does he? I'm not gonna miss him at all. LOVIN' Ethan! Will we see an Ethan/Serina pairing? That could be fun. & I adored the way Spuffy dealt w/ the Council's goons--& how the goons responded. Makes me a little curious about the leader who wanted to retire, to tell you the truth. Ooh, & I liked Ethan's insight into Faith. Taking down the Initiative should be fun, can't wait to read it! Great chappie.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:20 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh Lord, don't know if my heart can take all these fabu updates! (But please don't stop...I've got people who know CPR. :P)
Good chappie, I liked that we just had a hint of Reggie @ this point, & that he had the same reaction to Joyce that he did in Never Be The Same Again. & I'm loving Serina being Willow's mentor, & praising Tara (b/c I adore her). I liked Faith's Slayer dream, was kinda hoping to see the cheese guy off in the distance, but since that hasn't happened for the Scoobies yet, I can understand why it didn't here. Bye-bye, Xander, don't let the door hit ya where the good Lord split ya! & going to the Cleveland Hellmouth? Could Faith & Wood not last long & she ends up w/ Xander? That could be interesting. I really can't wait to see what Spuffy does when Walsh doesn't release Angel (b/c I don't see her giving up the vamp w/o a fight). I look forward to seeing what gets updated next. ;)
Date: 06/13/2009 08:19 am Title: Chapter 16
Thanks so much for the quick update. Any smack-downs coming up?
Date: 06/13/2009 08:17 am Title: Chapter 15
Good to hear from you with this update. Hope everything is well with you and yours.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:17 am Title: Chapter 15
You like making me squeal, dontcha? :P Another wonderful update, I liked that Spuffy hadn't included Dawn until Whistler visited & told her she was being a brat. & I'm glad Joyce & Dawn are immortal as well...loved Spike's reaction to being a daddy. lol & I loved how Buffy dealt with Walsh & Riley--straight to the point, no second chances. Can't wait to see what Spuffy do when the military ignores them (b/c I can't see Walsh giving in that easily). & the Angel/Walsh convo was good, the disposal of Glory/Ben was kinda funny. I look forward to seeing Spuffy's reaction to their new pet...& more new chappies! Fantastic job!
Date: 06/13/2009 08:15 am Title: Chapter 15
i really like this chapter, especially where maggie brings up angel's past with the government.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:15 am Title: Chapter 14
Sadly, I have to cut my reading short for tonight, but I will continue to read this great story of yours soon!
Date: 06/13/2009 08:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Enjoyed the rest of this story too. Since now I'm up to the part that I had beta'd very recently. {Smiles}
Date: 06/13/2009 08:13 am Title: Chapter 13
It's been a while since I read updates on this fic. I want more!!!
Date: 06/13/2009 08:13 am Title: Chapter 13
Ooh...Buffy changing demons into good? Intriguing...Fantabulous chappie, btw! I really liked that the Initiative captured Angel, since he's in town way early. Can't wait to see the rescue! & loved the Spuffy, of course.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:12 am Title: Chapter 13
Coo ... ROFL ... how appropriate. I hope Angel "enjoys" the Initiative's "hospitality"
Date: 06/13/2009 08:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Yippee! The little Tribble will be here soon. {giggles}
Date: 06/13/2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG! Are they getting a tribble? That's what it sounded like to me...I hope so! Great chappie! I really like that Xander's gone...but is it for good? And the Anya/Wes stuff is terrific...Vengeance for Cordy? Hmm...can't wait to see what's around the corner.
Date: 06/13/2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Elbs like the little gizmo creatures...aww I can't wait the next chapter. Great writing,
jace