Date: 04/01/2012 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
I love "Not Beneath Me" type stories. I love how all of us can go in so many different directions with the starting point being the same. It's great! Yours is a great story.
Date: 03/02/2010 01:06 am Title: Chapter 10
Changed tied to tired in this sentence ...
Buffy yawned as she shifted in her seat. She was so tied all the time. All she wanted to do was curl up next to Spike to sleep. Being pregnant sucked, she decided. Physically at least.
Date: 03/01/2010 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
I fixed a couple things in this chapter. At the end of the chapter it has go instead of good for what Riley wanted to prove at the vamp whorehouse. Then I also had a typo on Riley's name (it said Rile) in the paragraph higher up that is Dawn thinking about how Spike showed up instead of Riley to the hospital.
Feel free to delete these reviews when you resave the chapter on your hard drive or if you just want to delete them. I'm just letting you know when changes are made.
[Report This]Date: 12/25/2009 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
great story, read all the way through today and loved it..more please
Date: 06/13/2009 11:11 am Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
I thought I'd reviewed on this. Anyway, great story and a very entertaining ending, as I expected. Congrats on another great fic.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:11 am Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
Thank you!! I always thought it was silly that Wes didn't head straight for Buffy with Connor in canon (regardless of TV issues). Fantastic end to a terrific story! I liked that the knights killed Ben, that Angel had to prove himself to Buffy...& I absolutely loved that Darla & Buffy went into labor @ the samd time. It was a great ride, can't wait to see where you go in your other stories...& if a plot kitty comes with a sequel later on, I'll definitely read it.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:10 am Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
congratulations on finishing another good one.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:10 am Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
liked it
Date: 06/13/2009 11:10 am Title: Chapter 12/Epilogue
Cute way to end this one. I chuckled
Date: 06/13/2009 11:09 am Title: Chapter 11
Really great. I'm liking it a lot so far!
Just a question...is Buffy a bitch in the actual show? Like how does she act and stuff??
Author's Response: She was in pain from a wound, and not too happy to have to talk to Spike about how he won against his Slayers. Plus he was trying to hide that he loved her by then, so he acted like normal Spike. Buffy had a lot of pressures going on with Glory and knowing that Dawn was the key at this point. She was kinda bitchy I thought.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:07 am Title: Chapter 11
Aww...I loved that Buffy & Wesley bonded (& that Wesley was pissed Giles didn't get a replacement Watcher for her). I also liked Anya's need for orgasms after seeing Xander stand up against Angel. Fantastic chappie, loved that they missed the convergence so Dawn's safe. I can't wait to see what happens with everyone since Buffy didn't die. & I loved that they got a mentor for Willow, & Buffy's considering contacting Faith. Great stuff! I look forward to more soon.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:06 am Title: Chapter 11
This chapter made me smile to see Angel put in his place. I also like Wesley.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Gotta love these Scoobies and their no-bullshit-allowed rule.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:03 am Title: Chapter 10
great update can't wait for more
Date: 06/13/2009 11:02 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh, now this was nice! Too bad the idiotic knights just have to have their way.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:02 am Title: Chapter 10
Great update! I really liked Spike's plans...both for the knight & asking Buffy to be his mate. & I love the camaraderie of the Scoobies & their interactions with Spike! Fantastic chapter, can't wait to see if the Fang Gang shows up before Spike gets his moolah!
Date: 06/13/2009 11:01 am Title: Chapter 9
I always love rewrites of Season 5 and 6 that really give us a much better season. {Smiles} Always love the Spuffy.
Date: 06/13/2009 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Yes! Fun-filled update.
Nice way of intermingling the Slayer's news with Glory going after Spike.
Wonder where they're heading off to. If it's LA there will be fireworks.
Great job!
Date: 06/13/2009 11:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Aww...preggo Spuffy! Loved Spike's reaction. & Willow going all black-eyed on Tara's behalf, does this mean Tara won't get brain sucked? Or that they realize Willow needs proper training sooner rather than later? Glad to see them heading on the run. Great chappie, I can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 06/13/2009 10:59 am Title: Chapter 9
"Spuffy's School of Butt Kicking" This is why I love Dawn. This chapter is fantastic. Keep up the great work,<br /> Jace
Date: 06/13/2009 10:59 am Title: Chapter 8
{huggles} Excellent chapter, even if it was a sad one.
Date: 06/13/2009 10:58 am Title: Chapter 8
*anime tears* Joyce! Waah. Great writing, I can't wait to see what else happens. keep up the great work.
Jace
Date: 06/13/2009 10:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh, god poor Buffy and Dawn. Giles is really being an ass. Great writing. You did a wonderful job with portraying the shock and numbness Buffy is going through.
Date: 06/13/2009 10:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow...Giles is being a super-butthead. I liked how Spike was integrated into these scenes, comforting Buffy & Dawn. & I really like how Xander's been stepping up, shows he's grown. & yay! Buffy recognized that the gang hasn't been that good to Anya...will we see more to the realization in actual action? Hope so! Fantastic chappie! I just adore this story!
Date: 06/13/2009 10:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, keep them coming!