[Report This]Date: 10/21/2011 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG!! I just read this from start to finish(?). I always thought that would be typical of Dawn to be a super-bitch slayer so no surprises there. Are you going to write a sequel so we can find out if Buffy becomes the true Slayer again and mates with Spike?
[Report This]Date: 10/20/2011 08:55 am Title: Chapter 8
Damn, an impossible request. All can happen, but my guess would be that something changes, and other stuff stay the same. Like Buffy becomes the Slayer again, and Dawn the sister, the rest stays the same.
Date: 10/20/2011 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I think the endings good as you can make up your own what happened next good work mary.
Date: 10/19/2011 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Interesting ending! At least Buffy believed Dawn despite all Dawn had put her through. And I liked that Hallie was willing to find a solution that worked for everyone. As to what I think happened? Spuffy lived happily ever after & the dimensions merged so everyone else could be happy too! :D Great story!
Date: 10/19/2011 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wait what? The end? Hey, Hey! That's cheating!!
This was a wonderful story!
Jace
Date: 09/23/2011 09:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Uhh. Please hurry up. I want to know how you twist this one, and Spike already has a soul? Intriguing.
Date: 09/22/2011 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
I really like how different Xander & Spike's relationship is than canon. At least there's a couple positives about this dimension! LOL And it's nice to see Dawn take some responsibility & do her job as a Slayer. Was the knowing/helping with the Amy/Cathy situation the reason Amy & Warren felt they had a hold on Dawn? Or is there more? Wouldn't surprise me, in this case. Ooh! & just where (or when) DID Spike get his soul? Can't wait to find out! & I like that Giles & Spike are gathering the troops to figure everything out. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2011 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was a surprise. You still got it. :-)
Date: 07/30/2011 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow!! Dawn really screwed things up with her wish! A cot in the basement? Helping Catherine KEEP Amy's body? Yeah, girl has some 'splainin' to do! Great chappie! I especially liked Halfrek's hesitancy about keeping something from Bony. And it was a nice surprise to see Anyanka visiting! I wasn't sure she'd do so or if she'd try to handle things on her own. I have to say I'd love one tiny flashback to when Hank was alive to see him interacting with Buffy in a NON-absentee father kind of way (since he got custody). & of course I adored the loving natures of both Spike and Giles. Love seeing the bed again, btw...even if Buffy was too hurt to do anything but sleep in it. ;) Fantastic update, looking forward to more! By the by...my b'day is Aug. 4th...any chance for some IG updates in honor of my big 32nd? LOL Yeah, I'm being a greedy little bitch w/ all my favorite authors in hopes of getting fic updates by pulling the birthday card. I have no shame. :D
Date: 07/29/2011 02:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Crap!! It ate my review! Okay....loved it, loved it, loved it. Adored the Spuffy, loved the support of the Scoobies (especially Giles!)...and I'm intrigued about Hallie & "Bony"...not to mention this "deal" between Warren & Dawn. & very interesting that Anyanka doesn't want to go back! Love that...terrific chappie, more soon please! :D
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2011 01:33 am Title: Chapter 5
In a way, I don't want the wish to be reversed, never liked Dawn much, but I can see how it all could change for the better with them knowing what their lives had been like. As always, I love your writing.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2011 11:58 am Title: Chapter 4
This only seems to be getting better. I'll be hard waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 05/18/2011 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Hee! I love Nigel still loving Halfrek, regardless of the dimension. & I really like the idea of the vengeance demons needing to be in check a bit. Loved the Spuffy!! Always good to see them caring about each other, & I definitely like this Richard...a friend, but not trying to get with Buffy. Can't wait for Spike & Giles to talk to Dawn about the demon...& everything else. Great chapter!! :D
Date: 10/14/2010 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
The Hassib family...yay! Interesting that Nigel/the Watcher's Council was behind this in a way to show the demons to only do true vengeance. Now I want cake. Dang it, Mary! LOL But I'll be thinking about this idea (& hoping for some one-shots w/ other vengeance demons being reined in) for a while. & oh no! Buffy's hurt! I wonder if things will get changed back before she's saved, or if Dawn will have to suffer a bit herself? Maybe Hallie will even get a li'l scolding for the error of her ways.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2010 07:09 am Title: Chapter 3
oh no, to be hurt so badly ?killed? when she was finally happy..
great update, hating dawn more and more
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2010 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, she isn't the Slayer right now, so no fast healing, something to think about while I wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2010 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
when I first started to read this story I was slightly aprehensive with who dawn was friends with and what her past actions were in the new timeline. however, I knew you would pull something out of your hat to pull it off and you did. this was a fantastic chapter to read.
Date: 08/20/2010 04:33 am Title: Chapter 2
ohh interesting so far!! hope there's more!!:)
[Report This]Date: 08/17/2010 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Is it weird that I actually prefer this 'verse over the other?
I was never really much of a fan of Dawn anyways, I always found her character to be kind of annoying, so to see her shown in such a poor light is welcome. And nice Buffy is so much... well nicer and it helps to endear me to her character. And I'm enjoying her core group of friends, it looks like they function better as well in this topsy-turvy world. Can't wait to see what else you change.
Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2010 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2
You have made Dawn really hard to like in this one. An angle I've never seen before, and it's really hard to find new ways. Good job, liked it a lot.
Date: 08/16/2010 02:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Uuh, sounds complicated. Like it. Now to chapter two.
Date: 08/15/2010 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
absolutley brilliant...cant wait for the next chapters
[Report This]Date: 08/14/2010 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
this gets better and better. Hating Dawn of course
more please, now
Date: 08/14/2010 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow...Hallie had a LOT of fun w/ this wish! I wonder if Dawn will be able to track her down & switch things back before she finds that she has NO ONE to trust b/c she can't trust her "friends" & Buffy & her friends don't trust her. Very intriguing. Can't wait to see how this all plays out! Off to favorite!
Date: 08/14/2010 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh...very interesting! I like this take on things, can't wait to see where it goes! & I love that Spuffy fell in love during the Glory times. But damn! Dawn's a bit of an unfeeling Slayer (having no problem sacrificing her sister)...wonder what else is screwy...off to read the next chappie! (I should really check my email everyday so I don't miss gems like this!)