Date: 01/23/2013 10:51 am Title: Chapter 13
Excellent ending! Sad that once again, Buffy was forced to leave Spike, but loved that he survived in the end. :) & uh-oh...Yokk-Foi isn't done yet? Does this mean a sequel? I wouldn't hate that. Oh yeah, & it cracked me up when Buffy asked her boss if she had any contacts in Cleveland. Great chapter!
Date: 12/28/2012 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Good chapter! I really liked the end where we find out not every Travers is involved in the Watcher's Council. & I cracked up when Spike gave Buffy a little bit of a hard time regarding the Watcher's Council. Oh & good job involving Wes (& his POV), I always like seeing him.
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2012 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. As things seem so similar to the show, I found myself wishing that Angel came to Sunnydale but the greeting very different from what he expect. (Really love to see Angel suffer.)
Date: 12/09/2012 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! I really liked Terra Mater & Anyanka working together to erase the memories of the Yokk-Foi from the Initiative. Also, I loved that Hoffy's plan to take Anyanka's power center backfired on him. Glas Wes got a call to AI, just in case...of course Angel was more concerned w/ Buffy's dating status! LOL Oh yeah, & I appreciated that Cordy was not team Xander/Willow. Kinda missing the Spuffy interaction, though...at least we got a tiny bit of it!
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2012 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
Buffy doesn't seem as upset as they sort of expected.
Date: 06/22/2012 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
So the Yokk-Foi got Rack...can't say he was any big loss. & I like that the Yokk-Foi is already interested in the power of the Hellmouth. Poor Buffy, she needs better friends. I do like how Anyanka was both matter-of-fact and sympathetic. & I'm glad she & Terra Mater will check out the Lowell house/fake fraternity. I look forward to seeing the "forces of good" meeting. lol Good chapter...I liked seeing a bit more happening. :)
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2011 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Getting better and better.
Date: 07/08/2011 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yay! Ethan's been roped into helping! LOL & I like that he 'speaks' to something in Sol...very interesting. I really liked the addition of the Foi-Yokk, and how they differ from their (basically) cousins, the Yokk-Foi. Also I really love the Anya involvement (love her!) & it's nice to see Wes going to Sunnydale to help Buffy. Great chapter! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2011 01:58 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm really getting into this one and liking it even more as we get more information.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2011 05:20 am Title: Chapter 8
wonderful..great prigress and look forward to more
Date: 03/10/2011 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ack! Everyone's going down! LOL Great chapter! I really liked Anya & Ethan finding Xander & Willow's bodies. & I adored that she felt it was necessary/right to tell Buffy. Oh yeah, I can't wait to see Terra Mater, Anyanka, & Spuffy working together--hopefully with Ethan? Wasn't expecting to see him & I'm glad of it. Maybe he could be Buffy's new Watcher? Especially since Wes seems to still be Faith's Watcher (sort of). Glad to know she's in LA with Angel & Cordy. VERY interesting that Anyanka granted a wish to create the Yokk-Foi. I hope Hoffy isn't too mad! Glad the demons are listening to Spike, loved how he slipped in the mating so casually. :D
Date: 10/14/2010 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
Luna & Sol gave me a giggle...as did Anya worrying if Buffy would blame her for Xander & Willow's deaths. Loved the convo w/ Wes, can't wait to see more of him soon! & I hope we get to see Spike @ the Demonic Assembly...@ least for a little bit. I do wonder if those files will be useful to Buffy in the future? Perhaps the cop can keep a copy @ the station & give a copy of the files to Buffy for future slaying endeavors...that would be good. Good chappie, off to read more updates! LOL
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2010 02:30 am Title: Chapter 6
It's so good and now I have to wait for your kittens to get home before I can get more, damn.
Date: 06/26/2010 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bwahahahahaha!! The last Riley part of the chapter was perfect! & I'm always up for some Riley death. :D No surprise the army's idea didn't work, I found that pretty hilarious too. Especially since it led to Riley's death. ;) But Poor Detective Stein! If only Riley wasn't such a poopyhead, Stein might've eventually recovered (somewhat). & I'm loving Mayor Wilkins' cop nephew--he's a fun character! Just a wee bit of Spuffy, but I can't wait to see Sol & Luna...if Sol's the brother, does that mean Spike won't need the Gem of Amara to walk in the sun? That could be pretty cool. & now that Spuffy will be "related" to Tara, I do hope they get a chance to spend time w/ her--changed as she may be. & what an "Oops!" moment! Terra Mater opening the Hellmouth accidentally. Hee! Terrific chapter! Hope the muse speaks to you soon! :)
Date: 06/26/2010 08:05 am Title: Chapter 6
lol, Riley insulted Hally.... Things like that make you wonder what came first.
So both Buffy and Spike are going to be hosts, huh? Wonder what's going to happen to them after as far as transferred powers.
great (and quick!) update, thanks for the entertainment! :)
Date: 06/25/2010 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
well, I can't say that I'm sad about Willow or Xander, or that I'm at all shocked about the initiatives lack of foresight. idiots. :)
Terra Mater still has Tara's memories, but where is Tara? Is her soul still present, or did it get pushed out to make room? Or did it more... mesh with the goddess? hmmm...
I wonder how Buffy will feel, though, now that the last remnants of the Scoobies are completely gone. :( That said, great update, thanks!! ^_^
Date: 06/25/2010 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooh...so Tara is no more, just the Goddess remains? Or is there some semblance of Tara still present? & I liked the convo between the Yokk & the Foi--will we find out who was right about the destruction of their paradise? Or are they both wrong? Either way, the Iniative has a BIG mess to clean up, & I'm sure they'll have no way of stopping it. Good thing there's a goddess hanging around! Hee! Now did the Yokk-Foi cause the earthquake, or was that something else entirely that the Yokk-Foi took advantage of? Does it matter to the story? Who knows? But I'll keep asking questions, 1) B/c I wanna know (LOL), & 2) b/c maybe it'll convince some plot kitties to come out & play! Anyhoo, interesting that Willow & Xander embraced the hyena spirit...& that it may be part of the blame for why they act like such buttheads. But too bad, so sad...they're dead. & I can't bring myself to care. Then again, I'm a Buffy girl, through & through. Ooh & I really liked the idea that Terra Mater thinks Anyanka would make a fantastic priestess! Glad Spuffy are meeting her right away, can't wait to see what they think of the situation & Tara's new life & abilities! Great chappie!
Date: 06/25/2010 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice touch with having Willow and Xander possessed by the hyena demon, but have'll she take their death? Blame herself? I hope not.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2010 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
fantastic story so far ... cant wait till tomorrow for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2010 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
great chapter, loving this story..please kick some xander ass
Date: 06/24/2010 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay!! Spuffiness!! God, I'm so easy. LOL Great chapter. I really loved seeing Spike tending to Buffy, & soothing her worries while letting her grieve for Giles. Oh Giles! We shall miss thee! I also loved that we saw WHEN they got together...as well as a few details on the meeting. ;) So...the "creature" is the product of Maggie's experimentation--interesting. Glad it killed ADAM, though...especially since the enjoining spell wouldn't help now. Ooh, I love Anyanka!Anya...so I'm glad she's still a vengeance demon...& that wish! Hee! Yay for Tara! & I liked Anya sticking up for Tara before she made her wish. Maybe they can be Buffy's new Scooby gang? Particularly after Xander & Willow's attitudes. & I wonder how this new power/strength for Tara will affect Sunnydale & Tara herself! Can't wait to find out! Oh & I really like that Wilkins knew Spike's a vamp...& that he (& now the boss) knows that Buffy's the Slayer. I'm really enjoying this story, I can't see where it's gonna go, but I'm lovin' the ride! :D
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2010 10:35 am Title: Chapter 4
I love the way they got together.
Date: 06/24/2010 09:16 am Title: Chapter 4
ah! whoa! look! spuffy! with their spuffiness! already! yay!
Should have known that the initiative was behind it all. Stupid initiative, lol. great update, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2010 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
It coming along very well. I hope there'll be more about the background of Spike and Buffy.
Date: 06/23/2010 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh noes! Not Stein too! & just when they were starting to understand each other a li'l bit. Oh well. LOL Aww...I feel so bad for Buffy...her Giles is gone forever. But I LOVED that Wilkins isn't blind to the truths about Sunnydale & asked Spuffy for some insights into the case. & I liked that Spike was forthcoming w/ some details. I wonder if this thing will get the whole town! Sunnydale could be a very interesting ghost town. :D Ooh, & what is the "everything" that Xander & Willow blame Buffy for? The price of rice in China? Their loved ones getting killed @ the Mayor's ascension/graduation day? Can't wait to find out! & it's gonna suck for Buffy to find Stein dead, especially since she has no idea what's causing these deaths. Oh yeah, & I hope we get to see Spike doing some of that roughing up on Willy. ;) Great chapter!